To do list of the day:
-Delete irrelevant sections (there was a point when these bits were really relevant, however after having someone read over it with fresh eyes, it is great to hear that actually it is not needed. Also, if I remove these chunks out, it shortens my intro. which means it will be the right length it needs to be!)
-Move sections onto separate pages (I didn’t realise that each section including things like Chapters had to be on separate pages… thank you page break tool!!)
-Sort out the flow from the end of one chapter to the beginning of the next
-Make question less colloquial
I know this isn’t the most exciting blog post really, but it is really relevant and I hope some of these points may help out anyone else writing!!